worked a little this afternoon and her glove side, here is a screen shot from the video. Looking better?
JMHO, but I think she is a better position here than in the first vid. Shoulder plane and position over the powerline at release is better. The toe of the stride foot is just touching the powerline instead of landing on top of it. She has created space at her hips to pitch through which IMO makes it so much easier to throw the ball where you intend. Bwalk63, the one area I would look at is her arm position at toe touch and heel plant. It's looks early to me. She may want to try getting her arm further along in the circle when she gets to toe touch, instead of noon at toe touch get her to 10 o'clock then at heel plant she will be at 9 or even 8. That may help her use the momentum more efficiently that she generates in her stride.