There are definitely some components of of the swing I like (hand/arm action and barrel path) , but I'm seeing a lack of lower-body involvement and contribution to the swing, leaving the swing powered by the arms. It seems to me that her sequence is off. I'm seeing her hands pull back, then strides (carrying the hands forward), then swing. I would ask her to make an adjustment so the hands are pulling back at the same time as the stride, and still pulling back as the rear hip starts to turn forward. The lower body needs to become the dominant driver of the swing, not the arms - hip pulls the hands.
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