I like the 'improved' swing. Lots more stretch and to me the shoulder plane isn't a problem. She reaches an attack position at load (high back/low front shoulder) and reverses it nicely to contact. She does have a bit of an uppercut for the contact position but I don't think it's a huge issue.
The bigger problem to me is on the pitched ball swing (is it soft toss or full speed?) where the swing seems to slow down into contact, which means she's not REALLY using her stretch but pushing her arms. So there's some translation still to come from the aggressive tee swing to the pitched ball swing, IMO. But good work overall.
The bigger problem to me is on the pitched ball swing (is it soft toss or full speed?) where the swing seems to slow down into contact, which means she's not REALLY using her stretch but pushing her arms. So there's some translation still to come from the aggressive tee swing to the pitched ball swing, IMO. But good work overall.