Just need to free up the hands.....Hands need to work independent of the body rotation. JMHO
I've also/always tried to 'share' TM's contributions/teachings.
What was the instruction on these 'dry swings'.
I see bat drag and arm barring. Swing powered by arm power and body rotation.
Like some one already said your DD needs to learn to use her HANDS to turn the barrel.
Seems like your DD is more 'concerned' with maintaining certain positions then swinging freely or with intent. Take her out to a field(if possible) and let her swing for the fences.....her swing...not a coached swing.
I think there's a good swing in her. Don't worry about what you think is 'bat...